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Mystery Maiden
Initiate
Total Posts: 3
Joined: Aug. 2001
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Posted on: 2:42 pm on Aug. 27, 2001 |   | IP
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crosing futile territory
lying between Love and Hate
searching for a dark eye to see
waiting for the soul mate
anticipating me
dazing plead
undying need
for the stranger we know
affection starts to show
serenity's touch through void
lured by love's coward
teased and annoyed
fantasize-
visualizations flood the mind
missing what was never there
followed traces of blood
there we were-dark and fair
wrapped in lace, punctured with thorns
now we cry, mourning for the born
glitter my eyes, soften my skin
become a part of me from within
the thoughts in my head are yours to blame
though we may never see, we will always be
you're my eternal flame...
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Glacialis
Bishop of the Sacred Horn
Total Posts: 1072
Joined: April 2001
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Posted on: 12:26 pm on Aug. 28, 2001 | | IP
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Neat. I'm too tired at the moment to say anything deeper. 
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"What did the city get from you, Montag?""Ashes"
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Mystery Maiden
Initiate
Total Posts: 3
Joined: Aug. 2001
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Posted on: 10:52 am on Sep. 4, 2001 | | IP
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i'd really like some more feed back fr/ you guys.....
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---(+ Holy Buffalo +)---
a poem of mine
