Thread Review for a poem of mine (newest post first)
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Mystery Maiden
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Posted on 10:52 am on Sep. 4, 2001
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i'd really like some more feed back fr/ you guys.....
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Glacialis
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Posted on 12:26 pm on Aug. 28, 2001
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Neat. I'm too tired at the moment to say anything deeper.
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Mystery Maiden
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Posted on 2:42 pm on Aug. 27, 2001
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crosing futile territory lying between Love and Hate searching for a dark eye to see waiting for the soul mate anticipating me dazing plead undying need for the stranger we know affection starts to show serenity's touch through void lured by love's coward teased and annoyed fantasize- visualizations flood the mind missing what was never there followed traces of blood there we were-dark and fair wrapped in lace, punctured with thorns now we cry, mourning for the born glitter my eyes, soften my skin become a part of me from within the thoughts in my head are yours to blame though we may never see, we will always be you're my eternal flame...
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