The following warnings occurred:
Warning [2] Undefined array key "extra" - Line: 100 - File: inc/plugins/google_seo/url.php PHP 8.2.35 (Linux)
File Line Function
/inc/plugins/google_seo/url.php 100 errorHandler->error
/inc/plugins/google_seo.php 311 require_once
/inc/class_plugins.php 38 require_once
/inc/init.php 251 pluginSystem->load
/global.php 20 require_once
/printthread.php 16 require_once
Warning [2] Undefined variable $location - Line: 1249 - File: inc/plugins/google_seo/url.php PHP 8.2.35 (Linux)
File Line Function
/inc/plugins/google_seo/url.php 1249 errorHandler->error
/inc/plugins/google_seo/url.php 173 google_seo_url_hook
/inc/plugins/google_seo.php 311 require_once
/inc/class_plugins.php 38 require_once
/inc/init.php 251 pluginSystem->load
/global.php 20 require_once
/printthread.php 16 require_once
Warning [2] Undefined variable $unreadreports - Line: 28 - File: global.php(961) : eval()'d code PHP 8.2.35 (Linux)
File Line Function
/global.php(961) : eval()'d code 28 errorHandler->error
/global.php 961 eval
/printthread.php 16 require_once



---(+ Holy Buffalo +)---
Poem? | ...or verbal pollution - Printable Version

+- ---(+ Holy Buffalo +)--- (http://holybuffalo.net/mybb)
+-- Forum: General (http://holybuffalo.net/mybb/forumdisplay.php?fid=17)
+--- Forum: Arts (http://holybuffalo.net/mybb/forumdisplay.php?fid=23)
+--- Thread: Poem? | ...or verbal pollution (/showthread.php?tid=263)

Poem? | ...or verbal pollution - Girl Fly - Aug 30, 2001

You bring tingles to the spine I thought boneless
And your reassuring rhetoric eases me into the conversation of the evening
The dark cold evening
Motherless yet more for being myself
When I tap at your keys, you answer
And when I knock the combination, you're there
How wonderful, how perfect that you're there
That you are.

Poem? | ...or verbal pollution - WillowStyx - Aug 31, 2001

I kinda like it. It has a lasting intrinsic 'tingly' quality which is good.
My only real problem with it is this line:
"And your reassuring rhetoric eases me into the conversation of the evening"
It just dosent really fit...
I'd suggest you replace it with something simpler but which still gets your point across.

Poem? | ...or verbal pollution - Girl Fly - Aug 31, 2001

"simpler"?

I don't do Anglo Saxon.