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Cold winter day
Aug 12, 2001, 04:00 AM,
#1
Cold winter day
-Cold winter day-

Corridors after corridors
each one the same
Beginning in darkness ending in darkness
lighting between is the only change

My only guide the shard of love
Last one, others gambled and lost
From it I see the outside world
I'm too afraid of losing it
I keep it hidden within me

I want out to the winter day
On to the shimmering snow
whispering wind
Where the bird sings in a birch
It is cold there
colder within me

I'm numb for these hallways
filled with skeletal clones
All they demand tribute
but nothing can they get from me
All I have given
Recieved only pain
My last shard of hope,
of love,
I keep hidden
Maybe someday to be used

"What did the city get from you, Montag?"
"Ashes"
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Aug 12, 2001, 08:59 PM,
#2
Cold winter day
That is beautiful, I always enjoy reading your poetry, truely beautiful...

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Aug 12, 2001, 09:04 PM,
#3
Cold winter day
I wrote it when I realized what my last shard of hope was. I've almost lost the little thing so many times.

"What did the city get from you, Montag?"
"Ashes"
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Aug 12, 2001, 09:08 PM,
#4
Cold winter day
At least you realized it before it was too late?

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Aug 12, 2001, 09:12 PM,
#5
Cold winter day
Barely. But it's still a painful point.

"What did the city get from you, Montag?"
"Ashes"
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Aug 12, 2001, 09:18 PM,
#6
Cold winter day
I know, but the best poetry, and even stories, come from pain..... or dementia Evilsuess

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Aug 12, 2001, 09:22 PM,
#7
Cold winter day
Nice one Glacialis...Truly beautiful. ANd Sorrow, you are right.

Sunt lacrimae reum
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Aug 12, 2001, 09:31 PM,
#8
Cold winter day
Well, seeing as I havn't suffered too much pain in my life, my writing must come from madness Orbit

                      Flame

   Gerbil


(Edited by CardsForSorrow at 1:42 pm on Aug. 12, 2001)

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Aug 12, 2001, 09:40 PM,
#9
Cold winter day
It came from the heart...

Sunt lacrimae reum
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Aug 12, 2001, 10:01 PM,
#10
Cold winter day
It came from my diary, and some extreame boredom

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Aug 12, 2001, 10:05 PM,
#11
Cold winter day
Diary is good...

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