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How does this sound for closer?

Lying on my bed, UNDER the blankets, on of my arms around his neck, the other hand on his leg, one of his arms under me, him making small circles on my back with his other hand, playing footsie, my nose resting on his chin, so that his mouth was just centimeters from mine, me shaking with ever movement he made, fear and anticipation wrating every limb.....