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My snow princess | Thses are odd times... - Glacialis - May 08, 2001
-My snow princess-
You sit there, writing
I want to touch you
Love you, hold you
But I fear that you'd melt
Like the beatiful flakes
coming down around me
My snow princess
Watching through the window at you
You're imprinted against my heart
Why do I wait for the day I will have you
It makes my heart gripped with chill
And your sisters dance in the air
All around me
My snow princess
You lay there in the snow
Eyes closed
skin becoming as snow
"The tyres didn't hold" he says
Your blood turns the innocent white ground to red,
my heart to ice
I hold your head on my lap
And I weep as if my tears would bring you back
My snow princess
The bell tolls in the distance
The sky is heavy with clouds
It is cold
I lay there in your embrace
You come from the heavens to me
You dance lightly through the air
And smile at me
My snow princess
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Odd times indeed. It's been quite some time since I last had a feeling that'd force me to write. Perhaps the numbness is letting go, or then this is a small ease before it tightens up again. Anyhow, I'll enjoy this time.
(Edited by Glacialis at 10:44 pm on May 8, 2001)
My snow princess | Thses are odd times... - Amor Fati - May 08, 2001
It's been a while since you wrote a poem with a tone of optimism in it! At least that's how I see it...Lovely.
My snow princess | Thses are odd times... - Glacialis - May 09, 2001
Aye, I had a light and freed feeling. Not the kind of light that I hate, but like I could finally breathe and stand up. Then, it went away.
Damn it!
My snow princess | Thses are odd times... - CardsForSorrow - Jul 12, 2001
This was beautiful.... I hope I have the chance to read more of your writings
My snow princess | Thses are odd times... - Glacialis - Jul 13, 2001
Thanks. I'll post them as they come, but it's been a bit slow since I got out of the dark...
My snow princess | Thses are odd times... - AmandaKaT - Jul 15, 2001
that was brilliant. that poem really grippped me. it was beautiful. hope u write many more like it