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-- Posted by Glacialis on 12:42 pm on May 8, 2001

-My snow princess-

You sit there, writing
I want to touch you
Love you, hold you
But I fear that you'd melt
Like the beatiful flakes
coming down around me
My snow princess

Watching through the window at you
You're imprinted against my heart
Why do I wait for the day I will have you
It makes my heart gripped with chill
And your sisters dance in the air
All around me
My snow princess

You lay there in the snow
Eyes closed
skin becoming as snow
"The tyres didn't hold" he says
Your blood turns the innocent white ground to red,
my heart to ice
I hold your head on my lap
And I weep as if my tears would bring you back
My snow princess

The bell tolls in the distance
The sky is heavy with clouds
It is cold
I lay there in your embrace
You come from the heavens to me
You dance lightly through the air
And smile at me
My snow princess
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Odd times indeed. It's been quite some time since I last had a feeling that'd force me to write. Perhaps the numbness is letting go, or then this is a small ease before it tightens up again. Anyhow, I'll enjoy this time.

(Edited by Glacialis at 10:44 pm on May 8, 2001)


-- Posted by Amor Fati on 1:18 pm on May 8, 2001

It's been a while since you wrote a poem with a tone of optimism in it! At least that's how I see it...Lovely.


-- Posted by Glacialis on 2:27 pm on May 9, 2001

Aye, I had a light and freed feeling. Not the kind of light that I hate, but like I could finally breathe and stand up. Then, it went away. :bang: Damn it!


-- Posted by CardsForSorrow on 2:18 pm on July 12, 2001

This was beautiful.... I hope I have the chance to read more of your writings :)


-- Posted by Glacialis on 1:10 pm on July 13, 2001

Thanks. I'll post them as they come, but it's been a bit slow since I got out of the dark...


-- Posted by AmandaKaT on 6:49 am on July 15, 2001

that was brilliant.  that poem really grippped me.  it was beautiful.  hope u write many more like it


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