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Thread Review for Love poems (newest post first)
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AmandaKaT
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Posted on 10:23 am on Sep. 28, 2001
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damn- just dug these up for inspiration (gotta write sumthing for college) and i dont think i can. so i want to improve one of these poems- but i need to know which one u lot think is the best so i can work on that one.... please help! gotta do it by monday!!
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Glacialis
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Posted on 1:14 pm on July 13, 2001
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Long and thin eh? They're starting to commercialise. Bad, bad God Bovine 
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Amor Fati
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Posted on 4:13 am on July 13, 2001
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And also the geographical appearence of the country will too. The album will be long and thin, from what I've heard.
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JuggleFoe
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Posted on 2:27 pm on July 12, 2001
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they ran out of money, somehow. rumor has it that PipeBombKid spent all the money on firecrackers in Chile, so they're gonna be washing dishes in a local tavern/eatery for the next few months.
rumor has it that the local culture will influence the upcoming album, though...
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Glacialis
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Posted on 1:33 pm on July 12, 2001
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Hans has been having many appearences on this board. Many more than God Bovine, speaking of which, how're they doing?  Still in Asia, or are they already heading for Africa?
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JuggleFoe
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Posted on 1:18 pm on July 12, 2001
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the only thing of mine that i've contributed to this folder was "i saw red again"...
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Glacialis
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Posted on 1:04 pm on July 12, 2001
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YAY!! WOOHOOO!!
 
Erm... Uhm...
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AmandaKaT
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Posted on 1:02 pm on July 12, 2001
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i'm not either. ok kewl i'll read ure poem.
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JuggleFoe
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Posted on 12:59 pm on July 12, 2001
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i liked the second one.
i'm not much of a fan of rhyming verse.
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Glacialis
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Posted on 12:57 pm on July 12, 2001
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Definately. I usually dislike love poems, but these didn't have too much of that syrupy worshipping.
As I'm suffering from un-inspiration period, I'll ask you to read out my poem, that could be the only poem I've written, that's even near a love poem. It's on the next topic page in 'Arts' and is called "My Snow Princess".
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AmandaKaT
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Posted on 12:46 pm on July 12, 2001
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akashan love
find me in the fire
singing to the passion burning bright
pull me into you
find me in the darkness tonight
we will never cease
our love can only blossom
entwining our lives
growing as one
make them realise
their song makes us stronger
the more they try to pry our lives apart
the tighter we cling to each others heart
my soul is aching to reach yours
now that hungers sated
we shook the lives we most despise
our kindred souls have mated
i breathe your love
i sleep your fear
i awaken your soul
akasha in its purest form
can strike even the weather
if i have you and we are one
this feeling is forever
By Amanda kathryn lay
i'll be waiting
i am writing this
as i have loved you
for a year
consciously.
i loved you before
but never admitted it
you are the only
pure love
that i have ever felt
it comes in waves
hits me
stuns me
i feel the energy
burning at my
core
brighter than lightning
more powerful
more brilliant
for a few,
beautiful moments,
it fills me
i weep
for this is the
price i pay
you loved me once,
i'm sure you did
now,
you,
who have had an unimaginably awful life
rejected by your mother
neglected by your father
act out, rebel
in a way that will only deepen you misery
unloved
unwanted
***********
But, you are loved
you are wanted
i watch you
love you
when you hurt me,
i loved you,
when I was angry
and hurtful to you
i loved you
the energy only grew
**************
for a while,
it lessende
weakend
the energy faded
but it came back
more brilliant than ever
shining to the heavens
into the universe
i filled the world with my love for you.
and i will wait for
i may marry,
i may care for others
but i will never love anyone
as much
as deeply
as ultimately
as you
i shall be waiting for you
until we die
maybe, then
you might
love me,
too.
By amanda kathryn Lay
hope u like!!
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