Thread Review for My snow princess (newest post first)
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AmandaKaT
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Posted on 6:49 am on July 15, 2001
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that was brilliant. that poem really grippped me. it was beautiful. hope u write many more like it
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Glacialis
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Posted on 1:10 pm on July 13, 2001
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Thanks. I'll post them as they come, but it's been a bit slow since I got out of the dark...
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CardsForSorrow
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Posted on 2:18 pm on July 12, 2001
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This was beautiful.... I hope I have the chance to read more of your writings
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Glacialis
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Posted on 2:27 pm on May 9, 2001
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Aye, I had a light and freed feeling. Not the kind of light that I hate, but like I could finally breathe and stand up. Then, it went away. Damn it!
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Amor Fati
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Posted on 1:18 pm on May 8, 2001
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It's been a while since you wrote a poem with a tone of optimism in it! At least that's how I see it...Lovely.
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Glacialis
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Posted on 12:42 pm on May 8, 2001
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-My snow princess- You sit there, writing I want to touch you Love you, hold you But I fear that you'd melt Like the beatiful flakes coming down around me My snow princess Watching through the window at you You're imprinted against my heart Why do I wait for the day I will have you It makes my heart gripped with chill And your sisters dance in the air All around me My snow princess You lay there in the snow Eyes closed skin becoming as snow "The tyres didn't hold" he says Your blood turns the innocent white ground to red, my heart to ice I hold your head on my lap And I weep as if my tears would bring you back My snow princess The bell tolls in the distance The sky is heavy with clouds It is cold I lay there in your embrace You come from the heavens to me You dance lightly through the air And smile at me My snow princess -------------------------------- Odd times indeed. It's been quite some time since I last had a feeling that'd force me to write. Perhaps the numbness is letting go, or then this is a small ease before it tightens up again. Anyhow, I'll enjoy this time. (Edited by Glacialis at 10:44 pm on May 8, 2001)
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